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Name: Hakudoshi Rentai
Nickname(s): Captain, Captain Rentai
Age: 490
Visual Age: 25

Gender: Male
Division: 0
Rank: Captain
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Height: 6ft
Weight: 180lbs

Body Frame: Medium
Blood Type: O+
Sound of Voice: Hakudoshi's voice can be described as soft, yet deep. One mat find it to be a little frightening. It is filled with absolutely zero emotion, which is why it may seem a bit frightening; he simple doesn't care. His voice isalso very calm, and it is his only tone - it never changes... never. Never has, never will. Even if emotion were to come into the words he speaks, it'd be misinterpreted as sarcasm, due to his voice sounding calm and deep.
Appearance: Hakudoshi is very different compared to most Shinigami, despite keeping normal racial nessecities - he is very different than the others in almost every aspect. First and foremost, he has long, shiney silver hair that draped down to the end of his back, while most Shinigami have a much more normal hairstyle. His arms are very long, as well as having a beautiful set of claws on his hand. His clothes are also very different from the rest, as instead of wearing the traditional royal attire, seeing as he refuses to wear a haori, he believes his current attire makes him stand out among others as a Captain, Hakudoshi wears a white kimono with a few extra armored pieces. To be more detailed, let's start from the top and work down. His face is sort of ovalish, yet keeps a sort of round appearance on the sides, and comes to a narrow end at the chin. His cheek bones sort of jut out, but nothing that ranges out of what is considered the "norm". On either side of his face are 2 purple claw marks, which is paint, but appears as if a beast scratched him and infected his skin. On his forehead rests a purple cresent moon that would take up about a quarter of the space of his central forehead. His lips are a light pink color and seem to never get chapped. His teeth are all normal, aside from the cainine teeth, which on both the bottom and top set are respectfully long, and deathly sharp, as if he had the teeth of a wolf. His eyes are a golden-yellow color, and his skin is a creamy pale-ish color.

Onto his torso, but this time around, we'll exclude the clothes he wears and come back to them at a later time. His chest is pale and completely bare, with muscles in most spots for a man of his build. Both of his pecks are 5.5', perfectly square, leaving a 1' gap between them. Below his pecks lie his rips, which do not jut out like most others. Hakudoshi also has 6 2'(squared) abs, three on the left and three on the right side of his abdominal area. Like the rest of his torse, his skin is bare and pale. It should also be noted that Hakudoshi gets about 52% of his height from his back. He only has one arm, which is his right arm, which as usual, is connected to his right shoulder. However, since he only has 1 arm, his body had to compensate for the loss of an entire arm, thus Hakudoshi's arm is now beyond the strength of both his arms when they were both there. His right arm is 3.5" long, with 5 deadlyclaws on each finger.

Hakudoshi's legs are normal, having both, unlike his arms. Each leg is roughly 4.5 feet long, which is typically long for legs. Both are pale like his body, yet muscular like an athlete's, giving him amazing running speeds, and even greater shunpo speeds than most. His calves are large and defined, as well. Both feet would be a size 13.5 in mens, however, other than the stated information, the lower part of his body is not unique in any other way, aside from his a scar mark being located in the center of his left foot, which most scars appear on the upper body, this happened to him when he was in the academy and was accidentally stabbed in the foot. It has never healed properly...

His clothes, on the other hard, are a bit different. They make up most of his unique appearance. He wears a white kimono, with a large, spiked iron shoulder-piece, and a wolf pelt on his other shoulder, followed by a black steel armor plate for his chest, and a yellow and purple sash worn around his waist to secure his Zanpakutou. His clothes cover all of his body, aside from his hand and the very tips of his claws, however, to start with, we'll do this like we did his appearance - start from the top and work our way down until we reach the end of the description of his clothes. As stated, his wears a large, mainly white komono. It covers all of his chest, goes over his shoulders and drapes down his left side (his armless side). However, on his right side, the kimono goes down, just barely passing his hand, barely exposing the tips of his claws. Towards the top left of the kimono is a white and red pattern, which has a large red spot, filled with white squares. Over his left shoulder rests a large, spiked iron piece of armor, which connects at the middle of his left shoulder plate, over his shoulder, and onto his left peck, and onto the corner of his black chest plate. On his right shoulder rests a large pelt of wolfves fur, which on his backside drapes down to almost the floor and flows behind him, but on the right it only goes to about uppder-mid chest level. In the center of his chest rests his black chest plate, with a gold and red trim, used for protecting him from most attacks. It caN repel a fair amount of attacks before it will break. On the back side of his left sleeve is the same pattern that Hakudoshi has on his upper left neck-piece, a red splotch with a white block pattern. Towards the lower end of his chest plate is a purple and yellow sash, which is tied tightly around his waist, leaving two streamers in front, none in the back. It is used to keep Hakudoshi's Zanpakutou in place, which is securly fastened on his left hip. He wears long white pants, with black & pointy shoes.
Introvert/Extrovert: Introvert
Hobbies: - Being the quiet type, Hakudoshi likes to be alone and by himself, it gives him time to think by himself. He usually doesn't like to be disturbed while he is in thought, but he wouldn't particularly mind if someone were to interupt him. He simply likes to be by himself when he thinks, as when he does, he tends to speak out loud and to himself, softly, however, he doesn't want people to know his inner and personal thoughts, so that is why it is a hobby to be alone: to think by himself.

- This sort of ties in with the first one, however it is a little different. Hakudoshi enjoys to go on long walks throughout the Dangi Realm. He'll leave Soul Society and walk through the realm, basking in the cool midnight air. During this time, he often goes back to his previous hobby of thinking, however, he mainly walks to relieve himself of the prescience of others, and when he goes on a walk, this is the time he WOULD mind to be interrupted. It's not as if he'll snap at you, as his voice is always calm, but he wouldn't particularly like you, and he would view you as an annoying pest in his personal conscience.

- Hakudoshi inevitably has a hobby to fight - he is, after all, a Shinigami of significant power.He got his hobby from fighting so many hollows in his time. The two races are known to fight, and have been known to fight for thousands upon thousands of years. Despite his calm nature, Hakudoshi can't simply abondon his racial urges to fight and to kill. The more he fights, the more he gets consumed in battle and the more he is consumed, the stronger he becomes, and the stronger he becomes, the easier it will be to destroy the the enemies of Soul Society. It isn't a personal thing, rather, it's something that is based off of instinct for him. It's his Shinigami instinct to fight and to kill, to fight and to kill MAINLY his racial enemy - the Hollows.
Likes and Dislikes: - Being the quiet type, Hakudoshi likes to be alone and by himself, it gives him time to think by himself. He usually doesn't like to be disturbed while he is in thought, but he wouldn't particularly mind if someone were to interupt him. He simply likes to be by himself when he thinks, as when he does, he tends to speak out loud and to himself, softly, however, he doesn't want people to know his inner and personal thoughts, so that is why it is a hobby to be alone: to think by himself.

- This sort of ties in with the first one, however it is a little different. Hakudoshi enjoys to go on long walks throughout the Dangi Realm. He'll leave Soul Society and walk through the realm, basking in the cool midnight air. During this time, he often goes back to his previous hobby of thinking, however, he mainly walks to relieve himself of the prescience of others, and when he goes on a walk, this is the time he WOULD mind to be interrupted. It's not as if he'll snap at you, as his voice is always calm, but he wouldn't particularly like you, and he would view you as an annoying pest in his personal conscience.

- Hakudoshi inevitably has a hobby to fight - he is, after all, a Shinigami of significant power.He got his hobby from fighting so many hollows in his time. The two races are known to fight, and have been known to fight for thousands upon thousands of years. Despite his calm nature, Hakudoshi can't simply abondon his racial urges to fight and to kill. The more he fights, the more he gets consumed in battle and the more he is consumed, the stronger he becomes, and the stronger he becomes, the easier it will be to destroy the the enemies of Soul Society. It isn't a personal thing, rather, it's something that is based off of instinct for him. It's his Shinigami instinct to fight and to kill, to fight and to kill MAINLY his racial enemy - the Hollows.

- Hakudoshi's favorite place in all of Soul Society would have to be the Forest. He absolutely loves to visit that place, it brings him satisfaction galore. He enjoys spending time there because there is a multitude of dead & thriving trees, crystals of all sorts, trees that contain the occasionalsquirrel, and an entire dead forest teeming with unseen life, and if one is lucky, even an old friend!

- Unlike most Shinigami, and unlike most any sentient being, Hakudoshi loves a good challenge. Being a high ranked Shinigami, he rarely gets a challenge, unless it is from a superior, which there are very few Sesshomaru knows of. And whenever Hakudoshi gets the chance, he will fight an opponent that is exceptionally strong compared to him, however it doesn't always have to be in strength. Hakudoshi is also a very smart and talented Shinigami, knowing enough science to qualify him for that of Squad 12! - and he would accept an intellectual challenge, or possibly a historical challenge, even a location or speed challenge. Any challenge is a challenge, and any challenge is worth trying because to Hakudoshi is equals fun!

Dislikes- First, let it be stated that simply because Hakudoshi is a quiet and calm person doesn't mean he doesn't have a fair share of dislikes.

- Hakudoshi has a strong dislike when it comes to people who refuse to see the truth. For example, if a person is fighting him, and Hakudoshi had the advantage and is winning, yet the person on the other end of the battle is over there talking about how if only they can pull through, if only they could do this one thing, they'd win the battle, regardless of how impossible it seems. That is a person, to Hakudoshi, who's eyes aren't capable of seeing the truth, a person who is guided by false hope and a person who should have their eyes removed and killed for the mere thought of doing such an impossible thing when it is clear they are unable.

- For racial reasons, Hakudoshi has a strong dislike when it comes to a Hollows. He doesn't understand why he loathes them, however, his instincts tell him to, whether it's blind hatred or clear hatred, he hates them nonetheless. He tries to see from both sides; the Shinigami side being: 'They kill innocents mindlessly', and the hollow side, 'We have minds, we kill because me must do so to survive', and once again theirs, 'It is our duty to protect the innocent and purge the evil', and his once more, 'Who are you to declare what is good and what is evil, what is just and unjust? Who gave you permission to protect, what if it is us you should be protecting, but don't realize it due to your own ignorance'. No matter what side he looks at it from, the side of hatred is always the overpowering side.

- Hakudoshi also strongly dislikes Vizards - or, a Shinigami who has obtained Hollow-Like powers.. They gain their hollow powers in some odd, mixed up topsy turvy scenario that turns their entire life around, while a hollow has a natural process: Menos, Adjuchas, Arrancar. Or possibly, Menos, Adjuchas, Vasto Lorde, Arrancar, depending on if that specific hollow has the capability to become a Vasto Lorde in the first place. Vizard transformation involves them hollowifying off to gain more power, which is an abonimation to any shinigami

Personality:Hakudoshi is and always has been a very hard person to please and to satisfy. It has always either been his way, or no way at all, or he'd end up getting either frustrated and/or pissed. It was difficult for him to get his way, so he often shown himself as a rude, arrogent and easily-frustrated male, though always showing expertise when it came to being a leader. Being a Leader, he was always stern and believed all those under him should and would obey him, or they'll suffer the appropriate consequences to learn right from wrong, and to spot a mistake before it could happen. He was generally a jerk to everyone, even the other Captains, but knew when and how to show respect when he absolutely needed to, and didn't show it unless he knew he needed to do so. It was just his way of life, it was his way of living. He has many likes, and many dislikes, and he is normal like everyone else and has habits like everyone else, sharing common beliefs, though his attitude was a bit different from everyone elses.

To start, he liked things to go his way, this meant his subordinates listening ATTENTIVELY, paying attention to each and every word he would say, and if they didn't, they'd sudder the consequences. He also liked when he had the ability to help the unintelligent, always lending a sharp tongue to whip them into shape, and if they didn't listen for whatever reason, he would be done with trying and simply give up. Unlike most Captains, he thoroughly enjoyed doing paper work, as it gave him time off to focus on the important things, and less time to chit chat about pointless things. He, like most Captains enjoied his privacy and time alone especially, as when he was alone he had time to think and concentrate about infortant decisions. Now this doesnt mean he didn't like being around people, he just enjoied some time alone every now and then - a bit of focus time. He also liked to train, whether he trained himself, or a subordinate, which either one he'd train as vigorous as shinigamily-possible, pushing himself and his subordinates to their upmost extreme limit, to ensure that the both of them acheived the best result as possible. Though, oddly for a man like Hakudoshi, he liked spending time in the World of the Living, as he felt a strange connection with the realm... a connection he could not explain.

With many likes, a man like Hakudoshi is bound to have dislikes as well, and he strongly... "disliked" these things, in fact, he had a pure hatred for these things, and they could easily set him off into a giant fit. For starters, he absolutely looked down upon and utterly despised cocky people, as he thought that they believed they were superior, while in the end them being cocky proved that they were in fact inferior beings who simply believed something they couldn't acheive. He also despised being interupted, and when interupted, Hakudoshi will quit what he is saying and simply glare at his peer with a look of disgust and disregard for manners as he could possibly muster. He also strongly disliked when people spoke too much, as he believed it as a weakness, as the person who spoke too much did not realise it, but if it were a battle, while they spoke their giant forever-long book, they could of had their neck slashed, and have their blood spilled all over the floor. He also hates it when inferiors are disrespectful to superiors, especially when it came to a Shinigami <-> Captain relationship, as he thought each Shinigami should show the utmost respect to a Captain, whether they are or are not the Captain that they serve under.

Even though Hakudoshi is a bit different from the others in terms of likes and dislikes, he is somewhat similar to others when it comes to having the typical habits, such as - he tends to think much about his existance, he doesn't know who he is, or why he is where he currently is. He does not know why he chose to become a Shinigami to slay hollows, nor does he know why he even kills hollows, as they react to pure instinct. He also has a habit of tending to look down upon others, even though he dislikes it when others look down upon anyone else, he think's it or more correctly, he does not notice it yet, but he thinks it is okay for him to look down upon others, as he secretly believes he is superior to most, if not all in some way or another. He also has a habit of walking fast, which is irritating to his peers, as he will be walking at his normal fast pace, and they will not yet be use to it and struggle to keep up with his odd form of stroll. He also tends to jump to conclusions too often, usually not waiting to hear the whole story before he begins to accuse others of things he is not yet 100% sure of, though he is only... part human, it is as expected. He also has an odd habit of laughing at his own jokes, which due to his personality makes it awkward for his dry sense of humor-self to laugh at his own joke, which others tend to make fun of him about.

Though Hakudoshi as a person is hard to get along with, as he is easily frustrated simply by doing some of the things he does not like, such as being disrespectful. He is frustrated easily by going against his beliefs, and will be quick to raise his voice or shout if he does not get his way. Along with being easily frustrated, he is also quite ignorant, not usually paying full attention to a situation before he acts upon it, even though that is not proper justice, he is just somewhat confused. Along with being ignorant, he is also very arrogant and overconfident in his abilities, which is a major flaw on his behalf and can cost him greatly if the time calls for a serious battle. Like most of his seemingly mean personality, he is also a jerk, being the first one to use bad language, and the first to insult for simple prejustices, which is injust and unfair, which inevitably makes him a hypocrit, as he goes against his own beliefs and dislikes, which as said above, he does not yet notice.

Hakudoshi can be very cold, callous, dispassionate figure, and is rather aloof, brooding, and indifferent, willing to harm both his comrades and enemies should they ever get in his way. He refers to anyone he does not find interesting as "trash" and treats them as expendable. Despite this, like most of the other top Shinigami, he is not particularly violent and will only fight when provoked or ordered to by his leader. His cold demeanor allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easily surprised or caught off-guard. However, he does not seem to comprehend the Human trait of fighting against all odds or the very concept of the Human heart; when fighting any person who seems to contain a 'heart', literally, symbollicly, or anything of the such, he always looks down on them because they allow their emotions to get in the way of their fight.

Hakudoshi is also lazy and an unenthusiastic character at times, who, apparently spends much of his time thinking and which no one appears to try and stop him from doing. In fact, he rarely directly addresses any being below himself. Despite being one of the highest-ranking Shinigami, he is not eager to take a leadership role, shown when he easily allows others to take over a battle of insignificance. He is not particularly interested in whatever is going on around him, although he is surprisingly observant and a capable analyst. Unlike many of the Shinigami, he is not violent or overly arrogant. Hakudoshi has also shown himself to be extremely aggressive, but still calm. When taking little field trips around the world, whoever he faces he utterly defeats, or tries to. Despite his current villainous status to the Espada, and current position of authority, Hakudoshi is a surprisingly polite, soft-spoken intellectual, often addressing his subordinates by their given names. He rarely shows any sign of alarm or distress and often has entire situations planned out well in advance. Whenever confronted, Hakudoshi is casual and uncaring, attempting to draw out a conversation and make small talk, which often infuriates the one he is talking to. He does so because he believes them to be unnessecairy to him at the current time, and he, in truth, tries to draw out their emotions, as he believes emotions to be a large flaw, and the more flaw he can draw out, the more of an advantage he believes he can have over his opponent, and in the end, kill them.

Hakudoshi is a rather quiet person. Talking isnt his thing. He believes he has a mouth for a reason, to express an opinion and not to talk things through. He believes his blade is the one who does all of the talking. He isnt rude or anything, its just that he doesnt like to talk and he is a rather ... irrational person at times. Though when he does speak, it isnt very many words, and its rather quiet, almost a mumble, or a whisper. At times, Hakudoshi is forced to talk, and when he is forced to talk, he talks rather quick, and rather rude. Though he doesnt mean to, he gets fed up with the chit-chat he's being made to do. As said before, he just doesnt like to talk. End of story. Period. He uses small, simple words in times when he is 'required' to talk, if-you-will.

Hakudoshi, though quiet, stands for what he belives in. He's always there to fight the long battle, always there to take the journey to Right and fight the "evil" people. He protects his friends because he belives friendship is the key to strength. His strength is drawn from his friends. Not literally though; as in he fights for his friends, and his friends are the reason he fights. It's not to be a Shinigami, or a Captian of a Division, no. It's for the people that make his life and his job easier, his friends. He is a really good person, though he would take a path for power in an instant. He believes that if there is a path to more power, there is a path to keep your friends safe. Which is exactly why he doesnt look down on the Vizards, he believes they have greater power, which makes them more capable people. He doesnt mind that they betrayed the Soul Society, because in truth, Hakudoshi would do that too. Hakudoshi would take that offer up in an instand if he could, its power, baby! Who could refuse?

Defining Characteristics: (Refer to personality above) What is truly... defining about Hakudoshi is that he doesn't have a set personality. There ar many things he COULD be, and they are listed above, but those are just possibilities. He can be any of those at any time, so it' safe to sat a defining characteristic is mild-bipolar disorder.
Specialties: Hakudoshi is very good at memorizing and reciting things he once heard. He could do it perfectly as long as he heard it once. Give or take on the perfectly part.
History/Background: Life must start somewhere...

Menkei, the average 32 year old man, works, has a family, has the good life. He lives on 2032 West Reishi Street, Karakura Town. Has a nice two story house, and three beautiful children. What more could he ask for? His neighbors were the greatest; cant afford supper that night? Hell, just walk over to their house, they'll feed ya! Nothing like having a neighbor like that! Or what about the neighbor that would watch your children, drive ya around town, or even give you money to smile at him? Oh boy! Didn't Menkei have the great life?!

Working for a Japanese Food Company, being a top-chain man, he was making some money indeed. He could afford to buy MORE money if thats what he wanted. He had all types of money: Yen, Euros, Brazillian, American Dollars! He had it ALL. He was CFO of the McDonalds down in Japan! What a good job, McDonalds is! One of the greatest fast foods world-wide, and he was CFO of McDonalds: Japan! Can't you just imagine his power (over the food), to just sit there, watch your stores, and leave everything else to the accountants and CEO? He didn't even really have to work at all! He could show up in his boxers, smile, and call it a day and leave with a fat wallet!

However, things change, shit happens, people die. Death is inescapeable, and it happens. It can happen expectedly, or unexpected, and nobody can really tell between the two. Some people may have cancer, be told to live for 2 months, and live for 10 years! Though it is highly unlikely, it happens. Or you could be perfectly healthy, and go to sleep nice and comfortable, with a nice full stomach of the sushi you had at a fancy resteraunt, and just never ever wake back from. You have been embraced by the Eternal Slumber. And know what; there's not a damn thing you can do.

Thankfully, there is life after you die, either at a Citizen of the Soul Society, or as a Hollow. Some people get saved by the Soul Reapers, and others are destined to become hollows. Once again, there's nothing you can do about it, it all depends on the Shinigami. If they're fast enough, they can reach you and send you on your way to Soul Society. Or they can forget about you - those wretched Shinigami, and they wont come for you, and the Chain of Fate will fade, and you'll have a big gaping hole in your chest! You'll be nothing but an empty spirit, fighting to eat souls of your loved ones, killing, eating! And this just so happens to be the case of mister Menkei. He dies.

One day, after leaving work, he gets into his nice Toyota, and decides to take the long way home. Foolish mistake, it would take a role in his death. Being of high power, he has enough money to get him out of any trouble he could ever get in - so why not have some fun and break the law? Running red lights, and just breaking the law. Typical for rich people, isnt it? Well Mr. Menkei decides to go speeding on the roads one day, and decides he's too good for the stop light. Excessing 70 MPH, he runs the light, and another car comes out in front of him, and he flies out of his windshield and is splatted on the floor. Poor death for Mr.Menkei, isn't it?

Everything is black for quite some time, and he think's he's unconscience, however, he wakes up in the hospital, with his family at his bed, crying. He walks over to them to comfort them, however he comes to find out he's not even in a body, because his body is laying on the bed! What is going on, how can he get back into his body? Why does his chest hurt, and why is there a chain? Who can answer these questions?! Why is the chain breaking off?! Why wont anybody come to save him! All he can do it wander around aimlessly, crying; he is hurt, and he is confused. What is this new existance, and why is the chain getting smaller, and a hole beginning to grow on his chest?

Weeks later...sure enough...


Poor little Riku, a 17 year old student, without parents, without brothers or sisters, and without any support. He was exiled from his family at the age of 14, for his terrible performance in school, and his red hair. He brought shame to his family, and so they fixed the problem. Riku has been dead for several days, and like Menkei, he is confused, and he has questions, and the chain is fading, and the hole is growing. He has a growing hate for his family, however he is not sad. He wants to get them for what they've done, and once his new transformation is complete, he can do just that.

Two days pass, and the chain is gone, and the hole is whole, and he has a new body, with new desires. Go after your loved ones, go get back at them, eat them, take their soul. This is all in his instinct, he feels this is what he must do, and this is what he did do. He ate his younger sister first, and laughed about it as he ate his father, mother, and two older brothers. How sweet this taste was, the taste of a human soul, how great was the blood, how he loved it! It fueled him, and he wanted more!

Wait wait wait a damn second, this wasn't Hakudoshi either!

With so many souls to choose from, Hakudoshi may never know which one he was at the very start, as all the memories of the countless souls he has devoured has clouded his mind, and their memories have entangled with his.

Skip the formalities!

Hakudoshi, Adjuchas level hollow, strong, yet not the strongest. He had many scars on his creature like body due to the Shinigami who have tried to kill him, and he hates them, he hates them with a passion. They didn't save him, and they expect him to stand idle while they kill him, and with any resistance he shows, they attack more?! Those damn Shinigami, they're hated among the Hollows! However, no matter how hated they are, they have the second best taste of a soul. Who has the first best taste? You guessed it, it's his own kind. Every sweet soul he gets from them, he gets stronger, and more of his wounds disappear. Who would give that up? So what if you had to be a cannibal, with more power came more of a chance to kill the shinigami, the hated ones! The more power he got, the quicker he could end all of their lives!
He traveled alone, and his power was different from other Adjuchas level hollow, he had a cero, yes, and he had high speed, strength, and a tough Hierro. Though he had another power, other hollows didn't have. With the blood that came from the Hollow and Shinigami he fought, he could use that blood to his advantage. He could defend with it, and he could use it as a weapon, and he could throw it in their face, ahh did this help him alot! However, there were times where even with his unique power, he couldnt win, and he almost had been devoured by another hollow. They were ten times bigger and ten times badder than he, and his unique ability proved to be worthless against their Cero, and their brute strength. They shattered his defense, and took a shunk out of his arm, and tried to move on to the rest of his body.

However, he was saved, by what appeared to be a human. He was much stronger than Sangre, and could of killed him if he wanted. Though he was told there was 'something special' about him, and that he could live. And on that note, the mysterious man disappeared into thin air, quick as lightning. He was saved, and he needed to get stronger, by the only way he knew. To devour the other creatures, to eat them, and so consume their power and get it for himself! He would do it, and he would grow to take on new forms and new powers! He would become one of the strongest he had ever known!Though he did have troubles getting to his goal, because of course there were many stronger than him, and many times had he been an inch away from his second death. Though somehow, he had always pulled through, no matter how many chunks were taken out of him, no matter how close he was to dying, and no matter how strong the other person was. That man always appeared and finished off his enemy, and left, letting Hakudoshi devour him. Why did he do this, and who was this man? Why did he always help him in times of need? What did he want with Sangre?

It all became clear, now.

Years had passed, and the man had stopped helping him, letting him grow in strength on his own. He had learned a new power, one that tore open a rift, and he was able to travel back to the Human world again, and encounter shinigami and humans, along with other, low-level hollow. And he had also taken on a new form, one that appeared more...human like. He still looked like a creature from the sea, with big red eyes, black scale-like skin, huge claws for hands. However he was much smaller, being about the size of a human-and-a-half. For some reason, with more power, he got much smaller. He couldnt say why, but who really cared. He was much faster and much stronger, and only came upon a challenge rarely. The only challenges he got were from those wretched Shinigami, and many hollow that were much stronger than himself.

Though he still did what he felt he should do, and he ate any human, hollow, and some shinigami that stood in his way of power. The shinigami were hard to deal with, and they would strike him with some type of Bakudo and Danku...whatever that was. Though he either won, or he fled against the shinigami, he usually had to flee, or he would die a Shinigami death. He found that the human world was nothing interesting, only eating low level hollows and eating mere humans. He shall return to the place he learned was called "Hueco Mundo" and continue his training there. So, he opened the Gargantua up, and returned to his home.Though he was greeted by a man, the man he'd seen years ago, the one that saved him. He told Hakudoshi that he's taking too long, and it was time he held out both hands. And he grabbed something out of his pocket, a stone-looking object. He stepped over to Hakudoshi, and shoved it into his Hollow Hole. Hakudoshi felt power coursing through his very being, and he was shrinking, into the size of a human, and growing hair, and his mask moved to only covering the left portion of his mouth. His skin got pale, and he gained red...rivers under his eye, and a strange metal object went through his lip, with a crystal inside of it. The liquid in the crystal seemed to be blood. With his new body came clothes, and a sword.

White with a black outline. Though to be more specific, he wears a tight white shirt, closing at the chest, so his chest isnt visible, though it's tight enough to where you can see the outline of his abs and pecks. It has long tight sleeves which go down past his hands by about an inch, making it seem like he is hand-less at first appearance. The tight white shirt isnt the only chest-area clothing he wears. Of course, he wears a white trench coat, which flows to the floor, in a thick white material. Covering his arms, and very baggy, it is nice and wrinkle free, though when the coat reaches his chest, it leaves the middle of the chest open for view, showing off the tight white shirt.His pants are baggy as well, and look like they are full with water. Them being baggy, when Hakudoshi walks, you cant really see him walk, for they dont bend with his knees, instead it looks like he is floating ¨C or possibly hopping. They are the only article of clothing he wears that have wrinkles. And onto his shoes, which are white, open sandals, which the strap is located at the ankles, with a strap reaching around the foot, locking in place on the other side. On his waste was a sword, long and sharp. It had a blue wrapping, and a circle gaurd. The hilt was about 5 inches long, and the blade being about 27 inches in length.

The man smiled, and he said, "Welcome to the family, Hakudoshi."

He had been sent on a mission to the World of the Living to do some reconissence, and walked through the city, slashing down humans, and using a new move called a Gonzui to devour hundreds of human souls in one inhale, but was quickly caught by a Shinigami Captain, who didn't even introduce himself and went straight for a surprise attack, slashing Sesshomaru's back, making a large gash, spilling blood many places. Sesshomaru quickly turned, but a thick finger was already pointed at his head, and without a seconds thought, the word"Byakurai" was heard, and Sesshomaru fell to the ground, and a bladeimpaled in his stomach.

His body dispersed into his old human spirit, and he was led to Soul Society be a Black Butterfly.

Hakudoshi began a new life in a village near Soul Society. Everybody in this village was always happy, doing their word for a living. No fights ever happened, and everybody always helped out each other in one way or another. Every body was care free! after all, they were the cloest town to the Soul Society, what did they have to be afraid of?

Hakudoshi has always heard tales of the Might Soul Reapers, they were Shinigami. Any anybody here was capable if they went to the Soul Reaper Academy! This was Hakudoshi's life-long dream! He had gotten a stick and carved it into the shape of a sword and practiced daily for around two hours. He did that every day until he was 10. At about that age, he began to challenge the local children, to which he never lost to. Everybody was impressed, a young boy that good with a sword?
After beating a child at a sword fight, the kids father became angry at his son for loosing to a child 3 years older then him.So his dad grabbed his sword (not a Zanpakuto) and challenged Hakudoshi to a fight. Hakudoshi didnt see why this was nessicairy...but he never stood down a challenge. Hakudoshi said he's play fair and not use a his wooden sword. When he said that, the crowd that gathered busted into laughter, yet Hakudoshi was serious. He tossed it to the ground and stood there, looking down. The man laughed and ran towards Hakudoshi, who stood still.

When the man became within arms reach, Hakudoshi landed a punch in his stomach, making the man gasp for air, but the man quickly recovered and swung the sword, which had cut Hakudoshi's chest, making him bleed badly. He fell to the ground, not crying, yet in pain, and quiet. He was getting angry, and he slowly rose back to his feed, looking down, blood flowing out of his chest. A blue aura began to swirl around Hakudoshi, and without a seconds thought, he somehow appeared behing the man, and flipped in the air and landed a kick to the back of the head. The crowd gasped with amazment. How did he do that? That was the Flash Step! How could a kid that was so young perform FLASH STEP?! Nobody knew the answer, but the fight continued.
Hakudoshi grabbed the sword out of the mans hand, who was on the ground, and he was about to lunge it in his back, when he heard a voice inside his head say, "Dont do it!". This had frightened Hakudoshi and he dropped the sword and fell to the ground, unconscience.

He woke up a few days later in a bed, though he didnt recognize where he was. It was a nursery in a place with alot of people dressed in fancy clothing, carrying around books and swords were. The nurse approached. "How are you feeling?" she asked. Hakudoshi replied by getting out of the bed, but was quickly forced back into it by the Nurse. She stated she was a Shinigami and a Captain-Rank shinigami witnessed the battle, and saw him perform the Flash Step with ease. The Captain noted that he did it while he was enraged and wounded, yet he still performed what many shinigami cant even do. The Captain requested him be placed in the Soul Reaper Academy due to his Immense Spiritual Pressure at that specific time, saying he could be trained to control it and he, with ease, could get a spot in the Soul Society.
Hakudoshi, having just been filled in on all that information, was amazed. His eyes were wide and his body surged with excitment. He would become a Soul Reaper! He could do it! Though he couldnt begin now, he was wounded and must recover.

He was made to lay in bed for a week tops before he could begin at the Soul Reaper Academy. The week was long, but the wait was worth it. Hakudoshi was a part of the Soul Reaper Academy! And he would graduate it! He would impress the Captain Commander and be granted a Captain Rank! He knew he would, he had to! It was his goal!He had to train every day, he practiced Kido, which he EXCELLED in, and he practiced fighting with his Zanpakuto. He had never lost a fight to any of the students, he was told his abilities were much higher than anybodies in the school. And they gave him tactic training...this was not Hakudoshi' suit...
But none the less. The sword training always went well. He always passed each and every test with a higher performance than was expected. He fought with his sword every day since he first got the wooden sword. He is very skilled. He usually never has a challenge, versus the other students who always struggle. He sometimes was asked to help teach the other students how to fight better, and what not to do, and what TO do. This was a good sign...

Hakudoshi went through the Academy, passing and being assigned to Squad 13. He was excited, but he knew he should never stop training. Hakudoshi trained for countless years, for over 500 years, gaining new power, He still, unfortunatly did not have Bankai, and was currently the only Captain without Bankai, which forced him to speak with his Zanpakutou every day for about 20 years, when finally he and his zanpakutou cameto an agreement that he will be allowed to use the Bankai since he has proven himself more than worthy. And after acheiving Bankai, his name was recorded in Seireitei history, and he still began to train, his attitude changing,and him becoming more strict and jerkish.By now, Hakudoshi was roughly 2,000 years old (True age, 1,770) and through his countless years of training, he had worked his way up from being Soul Society scum, to one of Soul Society's biggest successes. As of yet, he has denied any request to become the Captain of a division, and as of now holds no seat in any squad. He is considered a no-placement shinigami, as his skills cover a vast range of things, and he cannot be placed any one place for too long before he gets switched. Being about the level of a Captain, he's decided to remain Squadless until he can find a job that suits him, and he hopes that job will be none other than joining the all-important Squad 0
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